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noah j
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since 2003-03-05
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on the open road with the wind blowing in my hair

0 posted 2003-09-18 04:11 PM


as often happens
my memories are distorted
looking through the essence
of my murky soul

they lie to me
explaining the unforgivable
telling me you are gone
but i can't believe that

i saw you yesterday
skipping down the road
but it was an illusion
a forgotten scheme

a lost dream
i am trying to catch
so i can remember
what it was like

so i can see
you again in the
glittering moonlight escaping
from the shade of the shadow
you made when you left me

i will follow this road
this yellow brick path
hoping to one day
spy a sight of you


the only people for me are the mad ones-mad to live, mad to be saved, desirous of everything at once--jack kerouac

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Gaia
1 posted 2003-09-18 08:53 PM


oh Noah,that's a rough road to skip along
cyber heart hugs to you

KoKo
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since 2003-02-15
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Inside the shadow's shadow
2 posted 2003-09-18 09:55 PM


Wow. I know this so well. Reminds me of something I'd write if I'd have the guts to face those feelings.

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

mytuesdaywishes
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since 2003-09-05
Posts 254
a voice from the musicbox
3 posted 2003-09-18 10:08 PM


you are a wonderful poet. oh, and your personal quote at the bottom...lets just say you're my new favorite person because of that. jack keroac would approve :Þ. great work.

and even when everything was wrong, and we were mad at the world, it was still beautiful.

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