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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
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0 posted 2003-09-18 12:43 PM




This night I shall dream of your great
sweetness
Once again this night as all nights
I long to sip from your pink lips
In my dreams we fly on the exquisiteing
of love skimming vast continents of
lovelys and passion
The seas shall never separate our love
Its waters wave like small angels greeting
us from afar
We shall feast on chocolate coated and
tender always hearts of love
Adorned in white silk
I shall hold your against my body
You will always be mine in the eyes of love



                                   

[This message has been edited by QjQ (09-18-2003 12:43 PM).]

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Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
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With my darkling
1 posted 2003-09-18 01:02 PM


You do these well, such a passionate writer.
Enjoyed, as always.

Jason

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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2 posted 2003-09-18 01:07 PM


Well now...
How sweet it is!
This was really very passionate and romantic...you devil you!
TD

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2003-09-18 03:07 PM


Q, you are such an imaginative writer of romance! Makes a reader want to oooooo and awwwwwwwww!

To love & romance--and your poetry!
EA

SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
4 posted 2003-09-18 03:07 PM


So pretty!!!! A for you, and your love to share.

Shara- )


Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (09-18-2003 03:08 PM).]

LeeJ
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5 posted 2003-09-18 03:09 PM


oh how lovely your heart is....
Mystic One
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6 posted 2003-09-18 06:25 PM


Yes Nice
Magnus
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7 posted 2003-09-18 06:26 PM


Q,  seems you and I are on the same wave length right now.  Nice write.....Good Luck!
Mistletoe Angel
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8 posted 2003-09-18 10:56 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your love will certainly swoon to this each time you read this to her, yay! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, you truly are a King of Romance, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Glenn, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

suthern
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9 posted 2003-09-19 09:22 AM


This night I shall dream of your great
sweetness
Once again this night as all nights
I long to sip from your pink lips
In my dreams we fly on the exquisiteing
of love skimming vast continents of
lovelys and passion
The seas shall never separate our love

Never farther away than the next thought... I like this very much! *S*

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