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LeeJ
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0 posted 2003-09-18 07:50 AM


There is something very mystifying in nomadic feasts
Adventurous…due to unknown potential & topography
Festive legends, innovations, a residence away from home
Purposely keeping remoteness, to feel its unconventional ohm
Remote prefecture, strange fires polish through night lands
Markets, curious kinship cultures, spraying dampened sands
Arbors by the sea, an aromatic cluster, remains so leisurely still
By dimming twilight chimes, all gulls return to their wood
Sea wheat sways in an intricate network haply encouraged
Peaceful havens, where thoughts become probable knowledge
Upon a balcony where experience play their flutes
Dreams flash blameless across my cheek bearing succulent fruit
Extended spaces wandering amid the face of this Godly isle
A soul can silhouette and flame like feathers beguiled
Afternoons roll gardens plumage and sigh absently
There within I unite, where my name is no longer lonely
Lovelorn within such a slumberous innocence
Satin epochs reciting tangible airy balance
Like a poem breathing symbolic pure color across the sky
Corresponding, nevertheless, to an aura of melody magnified
Right there upon the sea, I sit on a mountain of home
In the midday light where all nakedness unveils observations
Reaching the water, an awe-inspiring connection of wisdom
Strangely aware, of a immense global village, not so far in the distance


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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2003-09-18 08:02 AM


LeeJ
I hope you are right. LOL enjoyed

Midnitesun
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2 posted 2003-09-18 08:07 AM


quote:
Sea wheat sways in an intricate network haply encouraged
Peaceful havens, where thoughts become probable knowledge
Upon a balcony where experience play their flutes
Dreams flash blameless across my cheek bearing succulent fruit


as usual, superb imagery and thoughts

Sunshine
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3 posted 2003-09-18 08:40 AM



This is lovely, Lee.  Thank you!

QjQ
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4 posted 2003-09-18 10:21 AM


oh my!!  you just get better n better with each word you write,,,

                                

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