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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-09-18 07:17 AM


Until...

In morning darkness
Isabel's tears building up
Her power yet seen

Reaching out to touch
Nature's strength making landfall
Tiding those in way

To be with, without
Old and young to stand their ground
Until wind brings down

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2003-09-18 09:03 AM


no one can predict nature, or where she strikes the hardest, and yet, there is still so much beauty in her emotions...her breath of life, shortlived...

Beautiful words and write, thank you

EvocativeVerse2
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2 posted 2003-09-18 10:37 AM


Oh...well done nakdthoughts.

In morning darkness
Isabel's tears building up
Her power yet seen

This opening is fantastic. When I realized you were referring to the hurricane I said...darn that is clever. Comapring the force and fury of the storm to tears. Oh how I wish I'd thought that up. Excellent piece. Keep 'em coming!

Bonfirelight
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3 posted 2003-09-18 01:19 PM


Nice one. captured that pensive feeling well.
Good luck to all in the path of the storm.

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4 posted 2003-09-18 04:39 PM


WynterGal~
You write the fury well ... hoping you aren't one of the nearly 3/4 million without power~

Praying you safe keep~
*Huglets*
~*Margge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com   

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
5 posted 2003-09-18 07:00 PM


we haven't gotten the full force of the rain and winds yet..we have till sometime in the early morning but the winds are howling and the rains are stinging...it's only the beginning.

But I am well prepared...and I spent the  evening yesterday and the day today putting everything away from outside and tieing things down...branches and leaves are flying everywhere.

It's just a waiting game now. It hits Baltimore around midnight...then us.

thanks and hugssss
M

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