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Open Poetry #28

Attitude

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2003-09-18 12:47 PM

Strength and power
Try not to exist
Develope a sense of domination
A following and heiarchy

That wretched display of poverty
Disection of politics
Importance
Dwindle

Spirit of my own
Lead a journey
Straight with no reverse
Crawl forward

Distraction discontent
Discord and disruption
Heavy stand
Then dictate

Circle of stars
Angles submission
Hear me say,
Following

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This feels like crap. Please give a sugestion.

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

1 posted 2003-09-18 01:45 AM

Hmmm will have to think on this, but I do believe this holds something.
Crystal

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

2 posted 2003-09-18 02:12 AM

you leaving us in dark..sniff(lol), anyways this was o.k. by your standards, i am gonna give it some more time and get back to you, i can't quite see it yet, it is by no means bad, just not up to par...

"For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible."

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

3 posted 2003-09-18 12:41 PM

Yeah I have to agree this could have been alot better and I should have put more thought into it.
And no Im not leaving dark. Im just "expanding" my horizons.

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

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