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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2003-09-17 11:07 PM


TWENTY OR LESS…#164

Copyright 2003 by:Mark V Sheldon


ocean’s symphony
whispers
of a world


lost


touch the song

taste the film

hear the soft embracing


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© Copyright 2003 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
angelblueyes
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1 posted 2003-09-18 02:24 AM


This is wonderful.
Crystal

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2 posted 2003-09-18 02:33 AM






(sigh) Oh Mark, the ocean is my favorite place of all, sweet friend, I can only imagine the beautiful stories and treasures beneath the sapphire waters and its enchantment is so vast, so surreal, impossible to put into words! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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3 posted 2003-09-18 03:43 AM


*sigh..
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4 posted 2003-09-18 07:44 AM


immersing myself
within a wave
of thoughts
sprayed with sweet syllables

the essence
of Life


thank you, Mark

LeeJ
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5 posted 2003-09-18 07:54 AM


ohhhhh, I most certainly am, and would give anything to be there right this very minute, as I'd love to see the sultry anger of the sea, where Hurrican Isabel is presently.  

Lovely Mark...Lovely poem to...smiles

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2003-09-18 07:56 AM


MARK  
I have, well done.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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7 posted 2003-09-18 07:56 AM


oh my how wonderful!
MARK V SHELDON
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8 posted 2003-09-18 10:53 AM


Thank you, Crystal

Yes Noah -- the ocean contains a lot of substance...

Meg:  ...another nice sound...

And you, Kacy

LeeJ:  I know what you mean, but others would contest...

Unforgettable, eh Sy?

Roniece Dawson-Bruce:  Many thanks

-MVS

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