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froggy
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since 2003-06-23
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Michigan

0 posted 2003-09-17 09:03 PM



On the riverbank I sit
gazing as the water gently flows by,
feeling the warmth of the sun,gentle breeze
which comforts me.

Listening to the sounds of the hummingbirds, bees
among the flowers and trees.
Hearing the other birds singing,seeing little ones safe within the nest of twigs and leaves.

Beneath my feet the grass grows O' so quietly, High
above the sky holds an ocean of blue, white clouds.

Such an amazing thing to watch and listen to what life brings our way.

© Copyright 2003 E.Griswold - All Rights Reserved
Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
1 posted 2003-09-17 11:12 PM


Froggy~

Hey! So nice to "see" you!!

Loved the picture you gave in this piece.

Susan

froggy
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since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893
Michigan
2 posted 2003-09-17 11:18 PM


Thank-you Susan.
I wrote this while sitting on the bank of the river behind my home.

:-)

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
3 posted 2003-09-18 12:30 PM


Nature is most amazing!!!!!!!!!! Lucky you for living so close to it!!! Lovely images came to mind reading this. Hummingbirds are special for me. Thanks for sharing this bit of the outdoors. Nice to read.

Shara @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
4 posted 2003-09-18 01:52 AM


I liked the image you brought forth here. It's always a wondrous thing to notice what nature brings us.
Crystal

EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279

5 posted 2003-09-18 10:46 AM


Hey mean and green. Lovely. This is fantastic. I true departure from the stuff I normally get to read. Send more like this my way. I really enjoyed it!
Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
6 posted 2003-09-18 11:17 AM


froggy - it's great when on can take of the time to smell the flowers of life. Glad I stopped by to read this...

BC

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
7 posted 2003-09-18 11:25 AM


froggy
Good write, enjoyed.

froggy
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since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893
Michigan
8 posted 2003-09-18 04:12 PM


Thank-you SharaRose for such a sweet comment.
Hummingbirds are quite pretty.

Thank-you Crystal for the comment.

Thank-you EvocativeVerse2 ( Shakespeare) I know its not my normal style of writing but will try to write more.

Thank-you Bill Charles glad you stopped by to read.

Thank-you Seymour Tabin for the comment.

Hugs to each of you.

:-)

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