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Laying On My Bed

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JamesMichael
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Laying Upon My Bed

As I lay on my bed I thought of the words she said.
Se said, someday we would travel the world and
share adventures that would lasts forever.
We'd frolic in the rain in Paris, enjoy Geisha
and sushi in Japan, sing karaoke songs in old
Hong Kong and stick our toes in Tahitian sand.
At that moment I heard my alarm clock scream
and I awoke from my lovely dream.
And then I remembered that the words were
sincere that she said and someday we may share
these adventures exactly like she said.
But for now I lay upon my bed.

JamesLee
September17
2003
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1 posted 09-17-2003 08:57 PM       View Profile for QjQ   Email QjQ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for QjQ

dreams!!!!

                                

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It all sounds great to me !! Chris
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I hope your dreams come true.Hey maybe I need a bed like yours, what brand is it...hehehhehehee
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I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

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lovely
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Thank you QJQ, Nightshade, angelblueyes, Koko and Kaoru for the nice responses...
Actually we have been discussing this for many months now and I find myself liking the idea more and more as days of thoughts and nights of dreams go by...like anything it will require time and money to put these desires into motion...thoughts and dreams but totally possible...she's in Los Angeles right now so we'll continue our discussion when she returns...James
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Somewhere... out there...


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Ah yes...lovely dreams...but yes..dreams can
and do come true.  I hope it happens for you, James.
Hugs,
~Vicky

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now


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James - a most exciting romantic dream, one that perhaps will come true one day...

BC
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enjoyed this much
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(smiles) Dreams can come true and I wish for these in particular to come true for you! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is so romantic, we all loe you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

JamesMichael
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Thank you viraynes, Bill, vandana and Noah for the nice responses...James
 
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