The star that blinds me...

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Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-09-17 06:54 PM

Vous êtes l'étoile qui enlève ma vue.

L'eau qui me noie.

Mon amour, cela chante avant que je me repose.

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

1 posted 2003-09-17 08:36 PM

love the reaction to this.."dat there sounds like french or somethin"
well i'll give it a try myself, though it's been awhile since i tackled french. here goes:

You are the star
that enlivens my (view,sight)
water that (...)
my love, the song
before i rest(or before the calm,silence)

and here's what babelfish has to say:

You are the star
which removes my sight.
The water which drowns me.
My love, that sings
before I rest

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (09-17-2003 10:05 PM).]

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2003-09-17 08:38 PM

Well obvioulsy my french sucks..j'ai oubliez tout les mots! But you're poem is amazing as is the fact that you take risks and challenge

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2003-09-17 11:46 PM

ah...

I am sure this is beautiful..

Susan

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

4 posted 2003-09-18 02:19 AM

L'amour n'a pas de, frontiere
Restes car je t'aime comme tu es
J'ai traverse l'ocean du verbe
Et je t'ai trouve

"For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible."

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2003-09-18 05:07 AM

Translation please...although I like it the way it is...James

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

6 posted 2003-09-18 05:34 AM

Darn, it's times like these, I wish I knew French.

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

7 posted 2003-09-18 09:40 AM

beautiful and I only know one thing in french

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

8 posted 2003-09-18 09:52 AM

This is pretty, and it trips off the tongue. Tender.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2003-09-18 09:54 AM

enjoyed

bsquirrel

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since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

10 posted 2003-09-18 12:22 PM

Tres jolie.

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

11 posted 2003-09-18 12:25 PM

What Maree said...

Hugs to you, Meghan...
When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

12 posted 2003-09-18 12:33 PM

je comprends
LOL, I just read this one, after posting a mixed language piece, je comprends...
c'est tres bien
bon ecrit

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

13 posted 2003-09-18 01:11 PM

J'ai aimé ths les lueurs de talent d'écrit.votre courtes mais douces ici sur ce site.

Jason

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