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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-09-17 06:49 PM


Ignoring infinity..
grasping the root, destroying life.


It is right to reject some things..
we find natural.. but only, they are
habitual.. affirmations of ourself.


It must be proven, if not,
the wind would not exist.

The sea would be dried and leaves
would be grey.

It's okay,
to be wrong..to sacrifice..
becoming numb..

losing the want
to

write.


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Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
1 posted 2003-09-17 08:43 PM


you're not allowed to stop writing..because i said so..phblllllt
Susan Caldwell
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2 posted 2003-09-17 11:44 PM


The aenimal speaks the truth...

You simply are not allowed...

My day would not be complete without a read of yours...

Susan

SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
3 posted 2003-09-17 11:48 PM


Say it ain't so. :'( One of those times when you get a lump in your throat. Sorry.

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

green_itchy_stuff
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New Caney, Tx
4 posted 2003-09-18 12:38 PM


I understand.  Things try to get in the way and momentarly blind you as well as distort your reality.

GIS

angelblueyes
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5 posted 2003-09-18 01:49 AM


I understand, but please don't stop.A read from you each day is what makes my day complete.
Crystal

eor
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blues & greys
6 posted 2003-09-18 02:07 AM


if you ever stop writing i'll die...

"For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible."

inkedgoddess
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7 posted 2003-09-18 06:56 AM


losing the want
to

write

ive been there too, felt everything i wrote wasnt true to what i was feeling, which was nothing, so i wrote just that , nothing,

expressed well, whether or not you wanted to write of it, you did

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
8 posted 2003-09-18 10:46 AM


Kaoru - yes, it's ok to loose the will to write, but then the talent I see in your writings would not be seen...

BC

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9 posted 2003-09-18 12:21 PM


Some similar language to "Hot white apocalypse." You're too cool. We're too cool.
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