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RunningWolf
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since 2003-09-14
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Michigan USA

0 posted 2003-09-17 04:15 PM



Down the trails I ride
speeding all the way.
Narrowly missing trees,
my wheels throwin' mud.
Hill after hill Im goin' airborn.
I blaze through the brush
chasing birds and squirrels.
Clicking to higher gears,
I continue acceloration till
I reach the trail's end and loop
around to do it all over again.
Returning back to start
got ferns in the derailor
and mud caked on the bike and I.
I continue to ride
grinding the mud and ferns in the
sprockets and chain.
In my deraior I collect more.
I ride till my legs get sore
maximum riding hours are four
then I want more.
Hours of fun never end but
sadly the trails do.
Stopping only to re-tie my boots Im
off again exposing another tree's roots.

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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2003-09-17 06:37 PM


Very great write

I'll take this time to extend my welcome to you, have a great time here at Pip!

MorninGlory
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since 2003-08-30
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2 posted 2003-09-17 06:41 PM


Welcome!  I'm new too, haven't been here long, but lots of nice folks here. Come and sit a spell.  Nice write.

~ becky

froggy
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since 2003-06-23
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Michigan
3 posted 2003-09-17 11:09 PM


good job runningwolf
RunningWolfsLilGirl
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since 2003-09-18
Posts 4
Michigan
4 posted 2003-09-19 06:40 PM


woohoooo are ya gonna ride to my house?
you describe your visions so nicely. i picture a warm sunny summer afternoon from reading this.
you sure would make a great writer. poetry and story wise. thank you for letting me be a part of your life.
I LOVE YOUR POETRY O' Great swordsman and guitar player. Ok time for me to shut up.

Night Night

RunningWolf
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since 2003-09-14
Posts 24
Michigan USA
5 posted 2003-09-19 08:11 PM


hello its just me again. checking to see if my picture made it in or not. it doesnt show in the photo archive.
thank you all for the comments and such. if anyone knows how to insert a pictre where the poem goes i would appreciate the help thank you.



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