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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2003-09-17 09:47 AM


It seems that lately I've been searching
for answers deep within my soul,
but it is not yet the time
for those answers to be told.

There is great sadness that is felt
wrapped up in this heart of mine
as I continue to hope for us
to both be able to heal with time.

I'm no longer sure of what to say
you already know all held in my heart,
and each day spent without you
just tears my world a little more apart.

Each day I pray for the strength
to keep on getting through
and each day I pray    with love
that your heart will keep guiding you.

{revised from Feb 4-2003
title changed from original untitled thoughts posted previously...
and still meant with the same love for you,
always BW. }





It's better than I could have planned, it's made me who I am.
{sung by Trace Adkins..}

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (09-17-2003 10:04 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-09-17 09:48 AM


ah..the search and the revisions of our search as time flies by..often leads us to the same place..but down different paths than the ones taken before...

my hopes for you that the love you give..is returned ten fold...


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2 posted 2003-09-17 09:54 AM



How good it is
to read you again
and to see your shining face...

Martie
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3 posted 2003-09-17 10:11 AM


Donna...heart's writing!

It is the road that takes the breath and muscle, that brings us strength to keep on keeping on.  

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4 posted 2003-09-17 10:12 AM


Each day I pray for the strength
to keep on getting through
and each day I pray    with love
that your heart will keep guiding you.


Oh yes, Linda...it was a pleasing
surprise to see you here this morning.
Hugs to you, sweet lady  
Ethel

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5 posted 2003-09-17 10:17 AM


Ah, Donna, dear heart, your words have been missed. You have been in my thoughts and prayers. hugs to you my friend, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers
That perches in the soul ~
            Emily Dickinson




    

Sunshine
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6 posted 2003-09-17 11:07 AM



Yes, he nailed it!

EvocativeVerse2
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7 posted 2003-09-17 11:18 AM


Bravo! Love this. It has such heartfelt emotion put into each line. To feel such an intensity of love has got to be the most precious thing. Wonderfully done!
Enchantress
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8 posted 2003-09-17 12:53 PM


Hi Donna!  So good to read you here once more!
You are always in my thoughts and prayers..
This is heart felt...
~Soft Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~


~ I love your glances meeting mine
     across forever or the room ~

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9 posted 2003-09-17 01:23 PM




(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, it is the most honorable thing to wish someone well even when a relationship crumbles apart and wish for that person's good fortune and happiness as that is what he wishes to teach us all! (sigh) I send angel friendship hugs your way, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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