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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2003-09-17 07:09 AM


If Never or Ever

If ever
Endeavor
Brings a truth
I would it be
Within my youth

Or would it
Should it
Down the bend
Then I would it
Be the end.


© Copyright 2003 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2003-09-17 07:13 AM


I like your style and it has brought me a smile grazie bello!
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2003-09-17 07:14 AM


oh and I forgot to add - you are easy on the eyes too!
MARK V SHELDON
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3 posted 2003-09-17 07:18 AM


This difference
of inference
nevertheless
impresses

Good morning, Sir.

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

Janet Marie
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4 posted 2003-09-17 07:19 AM


All things come full circle....
might as well draw a smiley face in it.

Forget youth...wisdom is sexy!! LOL

*ww*

"If you see lonely, clear skies turning stormy ...
Lightning strikes and all you see is blue ... this is me missing you"

JH

LeeJ
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5 posted 2003-09-17 07:53 AM


all things highlight and we can still see the simpest things like a child.

Good Good morning to ya kiddo, hows things
Happy Happy Wed! and thank you for your warmth revealing a somtimes noticed theme of care and adornment...

Sunshine
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6 posted 2003-09-17 08:29 AM



ROTFL at JM...She's so right, and it always looks so much better on the guys...

Thanks for the morning read, Sy...and I need to thank JM for the early morning chuckles!

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7 posted 2003-09-17 08:38 AM


cool u confused me there for a bit or it might have been me havin a total blonde moment, but I like
nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2003-09-17 08:51 AM


what Janet said..although I am sure you were
"something else" in your youth...It's hard to keep up with you now...probably was nearly impossible then.


M

Susan Caldwell
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9 posted 2003-09-17 09:14 AM


  Morning Sy!

Susan

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10 posted 2003-09-17 09:21 AM


I'm with JM too!
You DO make me smile...
don't have to draw one on me
Tea's ready...I'll pour.
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~


~ I love your glances meeting mine
     across forever or the room ~

Martie
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11 posted 2003-09-17 09:37 AM


Sy

I see the twinkle of youth and wisdom of age in everything you write.  

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12 posted 2003-09-17 10:24 AM


Bright and perky write this sunny morn Seymour! Time to put the kettle on once more Enchantress, I am here with cinnamon buns....umm...hee hee....I mean....I have the cinnamon buns ready! Oh my. hugs and shy smile, Chris
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13 posted 2003-09-17 10:24 AM


Morning, Seymour..

Good to see you this morning. I love this one
as always. You said a lot in a few today.  
Hugs to you, sweet man     
Ethel

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2003-09-17 11:55 AM


Hi,
Having a busy day, but just want to say thank you for all the lovely replies.

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