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garysgirl
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0 posted 2003-09-17 04:38 AM




My heart aches from the
missing of you
Hurt so real,  what to do
I know not
Phone calls never are
long enough
Though every single
day we talk
Letters every day,  but can't
say all we want

Your touch,  I miss it so very
very much
Your kiss,  soft sweet
lips touching
Your hands,  so loving and
tender caressings
Your eyes,  such love I see in
their soft brown
Your scent,  the masculine cologne,
the smell of you
The longing,  the desire,  the
want of you

Oh  my Love,  this ache of,
of my heart



[This message has been edited by garysgirl (09-18-2003 09:26 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-09-17 04:40 AM


very romantically penned,,,

                                

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2 posted 2003-09-17 04:44 AM


Ethel, this is beautiful
when I told the one I love that I ache for him and need to talk more he told me he didn't understand, sorry, and that he wasn't ready, wasn't willing to give up that much time.. and then, he said goodbye. I still love him...

You've got a good guy there Ethel...

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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3 posted 2003-09-17 05:23 AM


There lies pleasure in aching for the one we love! It's the declaration of love, renewed in every moment.
Beautiful, dear Ethel.
Love, Margherita

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4 posted 2003-09-17 08:01 AM


This was stunningly beautiful lady!  Oh the bittersweet emotion of a love and missing them with your entire soul...feeling not quite yourself or complete without them.

Big hugs sent your way, may God bless your love eternally....

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5 posted 2003-09-17 10:35 AM


very sweet, very emotional, very true....

"Vision without action is a daydream.  Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb
~ KS

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6 posted 2003-09-17 10:47 AM


Glenn, thank you.  
.
Allysa, I'm sorry. I can feel the
hurt in your words. By the way, it's
good to see you here. I've missed you.
.
Margherita, you are right. Even through the
hurt, I'm so thankful that the two of us
have each other. And that we love each
other so much that we do miss and ache for each other.  
.
.
I appreciate each of you.  
Hugs to you all  
Ethel

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7 posted 2003-09-17 10:50 AM


Lee, oh yes, when we are apart, we hurt
down into the core of our being for each
other. But, like I said, we feel very blessed
to have each other to love and miss so much.  
.
Kristie Sue, thank you for your
sweet reply.
.
.
I appreciate both of you.  
Hugs  
Ethel

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8 posted 2003-09-17 10:55 AM


Oh man...so sweet and full of longing! The graphic fits nicely with the poem. Well done garysgirl. Love reading your stuff. Looking forward to the next.
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9 posted 2003-09-17 01:36 PM




(big angel comfort hugs) Oh Ethel, I understand ever so much how you feel, as I felt that way about my Joanna until we broke up, but know Gary will always love you and though at this moment you may be apart, the love is true and golden and very soon you will be together with him forever! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, love shines in your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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10 posted 2003-09-18 02:30 AM


This is excellently penned.I wish you both the reuniting of such two blessed hearts.
Crystal

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11 posted 2003-09-18 09:31 AM


Thanks, EvocativeVerse. I'm glad that
you like it.
.
Thank you, Noah. Yes, I so believe that
Gary and I will forever be together!!  
.
Thank you, Crystal. My friend, your
replies are so sweet.
.
.
I appreciate you all,  
Hugs to each of you  
Ethel

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