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Magnus
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0 posted 2003-09-16 10:04 PM


They never return,
those winged wished for past
doubts and lost moments.

Sitting there, upon the rocks
beneath the mountain of life.
Each one carrying a name of
a struggle or choice made.
Some acceptable, but so
many stones turned that
revealed flaws.

Ahh, but to have the sight
to see the answer before
the thought becomes an
act.

To have the wisdom of middle age
when we are but a mere babe.
To know what to do and when.

Gosh, but life would surely be
a bore if all were right and one
never failed. For failure is our
teacher, though I assure you
failure allows us to fall with
compassion and a tear of
sadness intermixed.

Oh,but sometimes those
failures still hurt, even when
you wear a protective shell
of middle aged,tarnished
armor....

[This message has been edited by Magnus (09-16-2003 10:07 PM).]

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Richy
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050

1 posted 2003-09-16 10:41 PM





Magnus my friend, how in the heck have you been? Wonderful I hope?
I sure missed reading your poems. It is the wisdom of people like yourself,
who help forge the protective armor, that shields the rest of us,
from the woes of despair and the agony of misfortune...  

Thanks as always for your giving spirit, and for your infallible wit.

Wonderful words, as always!


Take Care My Friend,

Richy



Aenimal
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2 posted 2003-09-16 10:47 PM


you know i adore this
SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
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Somewhere out there~
3 posted 2003-09-16 10:48 PM


Sending a big

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
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Oklahoma
4 posted 2003-09-16 10:48 PM


This spke volumes to me.I so understand this, completly.Even though the armor may be tarnished we can let out the old and hurt and let in the light and new found armor that lies beneath.An excellent write.
Crystal

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