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froggy
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0 posted 2003-09-16 08:30 PM



Tears Falling

hearts breaking

one walks away

the other one stays.


Tears falling

hearts breaking

one marches off to war

the other one waits

   patiently.

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1 posted 2003-09-16 08:44 PM




(big hugggsssssss) I wish we could just stop using war as a excuse to ANY problem in our world so that there can be no more killing and no more lovers apart from one another, dearest friend, we are only going to have more problems and heartaches if our politicians and leaders keep declaring war and all this must end now! (sad sigh) This is a very compassionate and heartfelt poem, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet E.J, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

froggy
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2 posted 2003-09-16 08:47 PM


Thank-you Noah.

:-)

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