romeo and juliet (my Version)

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RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

0 posted 2003-09-16 05:43 PM

Your touch, tingles my skin
Your hair, tickles my chin
As our lips embrace together
A tender loving kiss
Given in this field of love

Soon heart broken souls
Release upon the world
As your torn from my side
And darkness surrounds our lifes

Lost slowly sinking into sadness
Wishing you were here
Instand of this cold metal sword
Pressed against my throat

Voices tell me you and I can’t be
But my heart disagrees
With the pleads of the mind
For life Instand of love

Finally let go free
Cast back into the world
Forbidden to love my love
Yet I break these rules
And travel back to your arms

Stood below your balcony
Thinking of what id say
My thoughts broken by you
As you stool out into night

Hidden below out of view
Heart beating my mind listening
You call my name to the moon
Suddenly a voice answers back
Yet the voice I hear is my own

I climb back upto love
Drawn to your bed chambers
Our bodies tangle together
Souls merge to one
Feelings flow through both of us

Morning light tells my time of leave
Escaping before my body bleeds
From the swords of hatred soon to rise
When your family awakens

Soon a plan is formed
So we can forever be together
Yet this plan unknown to me
Your death destorys my insides

I take my last hope to your side
Taking this poison at your awakening
Your death fake? How could this be?
Slowly I die in your arms
As you cry the tears of hurt
Your heart been ripped from its place

You lay me down to rest
Slowly taking a dagger of death
Piercing your hurt heart
Drowning your pain with blood

Two lovers lay joined together
Rested in eternal peace and love
A message to all is given
From the death of these takers of life
Let one’s love be allowed
Because it will never be disallowed
In the lovers mind for there love is true

And both hearts run to one another
Even if it means endangering ones life
Like the two lovers laid upon the floor
Wrapped together forever in love
Till the end of time where no souls roam

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-09-16 06:11 PM

Enjoyed,,,

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
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2 posted 2003-09-16 11:26 PM

Viva l'amour!

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angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

3 posted 2003-09-16 11:33 PM

Brilliantly written.

This ones going into the library.I'm gonna let my kids read it and maybe they'll understnad a little bit better when they actually read Romeo and Juliet.Have one that will be there soon.That is if you don't mind?