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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2003-09-16 01:12 PM



sitting silently sipping
full days of whine
without roses

watching the sun
hide behind
clouds of regret

you are not here
where my heart is,
and so?

here I sit in silence, holding onto
empty thoughts and dreams, waiting
with glass full of bitter whine

© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
vlraynes
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1 posted 2003-09-16 01:17 PM



"full days of whine
without roses"


Kacy...I know those days...and ouch.
This touches on some painful memories.
Nicely done, my friend.
Hugs,
~Vicky

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

SharaRose
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2 posted 2003-09-16 01:19 PM


Awwww, go for a walk, or paint a picture, listen to an old favorite song from long ago with a cup of hot chocolate, or watch a really *funny* fun movie!!! Don't be sad..hehe get glad!! Sing out loud and chase those blues away. Cheer up!!! *Smile*...you're on Candid Camera!!!


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Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

icebox
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3 posted 2003-09-16 01:29 PM


I got a nickel
you get a dime
we'll go out and get some whine...


*grin*

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4 posted 2003-09-16 01:34 PM


Vicky, shall we sip a glass and whine together? Is it true that misery wants some company?

Shara, hey, I'm not done whining yet, it's only been a half day session!

ice LOL, wanna daytime whine partner?

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5 posted 2003-09-16 01:47 PM


Oh yeah, I do love the play on words here...you really are one of my favorite writers!!!!  This is great, and I'll take some ice in my whine, please...~S~  

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~S~

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6 posted 2003-09-16 01:49 PM


LOL, hello dear Sunnyone! I'll smile in sip to that.
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7 posted 2003-09-16 08:25 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Awwwwwww, I know these days, dearest friend, I had them pretty much every day as a little boy being abused and unaware of my differences that made me unique and strange in the face of others but now, I find you just have to be yourself and try many things to get your mind off it! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I send hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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