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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes 
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It was Sts John and Paul That introduced me to the Church With their prayers of Love Me Do With Brother James the conversion began I Feel Good about being a Sex machine Ace, Gene, Peter, and Paul Finished my education by teaching me To Rock and Roll All night and Party Every Day Then along came the Reverend Willy G. Who made my conversion complete He taught me about the Pearly Gates About the Fandango and some Tush My soul newly saved, I began to pray Publicly pronouncing the Word And bathing in the lights of Heaven Being a prophet has taken its toll Testifying makes you soaked with sweat But sacrifices must be made Giving your soul to the Electric Church We are all equal but we’re individually different |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Amen...rock on grins |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Now you know I adore this . . . one church I am a proud member of yes Amen for sure nice job Brad xxoo |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Smiling at this, as I plug in my synth to join you!!! Great one, and any musician at heart knows just what you're talking about!!! ~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~ |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
Cool writing, Ringo. Witty, too. Enjoyed! |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
loved this! keeping this....this whole poem should accompany your photo.  Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Bradly, this rocks, dearest friend, this reminded me so much of the movie "Tommy" written by The Who, with that rock and roll church and Marilyn Monroe being worshipped as their God! (big hugggssssss) Keep rocking and rolling with God, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bradly, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Cool Ringo. This totally is awsome :-) |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This totally rocks from beginning to end. Crystal |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Raph- The rock is continuing on!!! Thanks for reading. Sue- My apologies for not bringing the Prophet Jimi on board.  Thanks for the kind words.Sunnyone- Power Up, and Rock along!!!! Thank you. Opeth- Thanks. Gemma- THAT is a serious idea that I am going to have to consider. Thank you. Noah- Kind words from you are always appreciated, and being used in the same FORUM as the Who, much less the same sentance is very humbling. Thank you. froggy-Thank you. Crystal- Thanks for the kind words. We are all equal but we’re individually different |
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RunningWolf Junior Member
since 2003-09-14
Posts 24Michigan USA |
I like this poem. I thought of the band called KISS after seeing the names. If its not about the band it would sure make KISS fans think so. |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Running Wolf- This is about many of the bands and musicians that brought me into the music industry, of which KISS is one. I'm glad you liked it. We are all equal but we’re individually different |
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