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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2003-09-16 10:35 AM


TWENTY OR LESS…#162

Copyright 2003 by:Mark V Sheldon


This day blew in
and found you older…

Was there a draft?


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http://educate-yourself.org/

© Copyright 2003 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-09-16 10:40 AM


MARK,
A draft can age you, LOL enjoyed.

KristieSue
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2 posted 2003-09-16 10:41 AM


LOL interesting...good job

"Vision without action is a daydream.  Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb
~ KS

LeeJ
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3 posted 2003-09-16 10:43 AM


well, this one has me grinning from ear to ear..whata lovely thought...your amazing...with so few words...I wish so I could do that....I ramble so, my mind just moves so fast from thought to thought, and, well....nuff said...smiles....hugs and God bless  and Mark...thank you for the profound compliment on my last poem...very kind of you to think so....happy day kiddo!
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4 posted 2003-09-16 10:51 AM


there was a draft when I was of an age..lol.. no I am of an age where drafts are another kind of issue...

nicely done Mark.. as usual..

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5 posted 2003-09-16 03:45 PM




(sigh) This felt both humorous and serious at the same time, sweet friend, it is an inevitable part of life but if we can dance in the breeze, then we will always feel younger! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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6 posted 2003-09-16 04:32 PM


Fantastic!!  Love this one Mark!
I know someone who's birthday is today...
I'm sending this...LOL.
~Hugs~


~ I love your glances meeting mine
     across forever or the room ~

MARK V SHELDON
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7 posted 2003-09-16 05:22 PM


Sy:   I imagine it would...

KristieSue:  Thanks for your interest.

LeeJ:  Never worry about word count -- just keep expressing yourself honestly and I'll remain a fan.

Ron...  you mean backdraft...?   Thanks, my friend.

Noah -- depends on what kind of draft, for winds can change direction given enough positive nature...

Nancy, I'm flattered and hope it brings them a smile.  Thank you, dear.

-MVS

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