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gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-09-16 08:58 AM

~.~

Landing off city ride
back to the green
clicking heels ache
my feet
simple simplicity
why didn't I wear different

Crow

coat of shine
black graceful greed
stalk away
when you hear my feet
smiling at petite beak
that holds so much to dangle

I won't steal your find
if you fly me home.

~.~

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-09-16 09:18 AM

Did crow oblige or turn the raucous cry in accuse..trespassing as you were...

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

2 posted 2003-09-16 09:21 AM

"Sneakie" little devil ...
much more comfortable to wear.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

3 posted 2003-09-16 03:30 PM

Wonderful imagery.
Eric

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

4 posted 2003-09-16 04:10 PM

Loved this one, and especially so since there seems to be a myriad of crows and magpies in my English neighborhood!! What a great read this one is...~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~

Wind

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since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

5 posted 2003-09-16 04:27 PM

crows...crows are the best to write about. expecialy when dead

lol...great write Gemma

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

6 posted 2003-09-16 04:38 PM

You're one of my favorites, gem. Your words calm me.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2003-09-16 08:04 PM

(sigh) I think we adjust well to understanding crows, as they too understand our tears and sorrows, just as sparrows and butterflies understand the other parts of us! (big hugggsssssss) You are a bird of many feathers, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

8 posted 2003-09-16 08:14 PM

i realllly like the last line a purrfect closing to this chapter of yours gem , i know how it feels when the crows are watching and whispering our names ... damn good again , i will have to post some stuff soon i am getting jealous lol hheee hee , j wolf aka aujuss, lattaa

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

9 posted 2003-09-17 01:17 PM

gemma - God, I adore this . . .
the image of the crow
snickering almost . . .
and this:

I won't steal your find
if you fly me home.

is perfection
xxoo

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

10 posted 2003-09-19 02:11 PM

Hate them I do, which belies my rural heritage..... and coyotes, who also live by stealing....both of which are fresh in me because I dreamed them last night while guarding one of my spirit treasures....but that's a different kind of animal than you've written here.....

But you make that bird seem somehow all right, almost attractive. Nicely done!

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angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

11 posted 2003-09-19 02:29 PM

I liked this from beginning to end.Enjoyed the imagery.

Crystal

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