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HopeS
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0 posted 2003-09-16 07:33 AM



His Thoughts I Wonder

It was useless me trying
I was feeling frustrated
Nothing much I could do
Whilst I anxiously waited

Long awaited catch ups
I remain in expectation
Yet the weeks of silence
Increased my frustration

My thoughts accumulate
Progressing to my pen
Perhaps I will hear soon
I only wish I knew when

Of his thoughts I wonder
He can read into mine
My feelings are mailed
In the words of a rhyme

HopeĀ©2003

© Copyright 2003 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2003-09-16 07:39 AM


and beautiful they are as is the words of your lovely heart, inscribbed forever....
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2003-09-16 08:44 AM


Hope~
Not only is this a lovely piece ... but I just got my LovingYou.com poem of the day !!!
It's YOU -
Congratulations, gal~

LOVE POEM OF THE DAY FOR 9/16/03
--------------------------------------------
Special Hearts Destined
by Hope

Each time of my writing
You made it worthwhile
Being able to reach you
With a hug and a smile

In delivering all my love
By heart designed letter
To touch with my words
Hopefully you feel better

Read through the words
Of my loving tenderness
Embrace heart devotion
Where I clearly express

Cherishing the journeys
Of sentimental affections
Gratified by the feelings
Of  bonded connections

Special hearts destined
By sharing loving insight
Our way of togetherness
Are words that we write
--------------------------------------------
*What a nice treat to start my day~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~


~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (09-16-2003 08:48 AM).]

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2003-09-16 08:52 AM


HopeS
A lovely write and a lovely read.

HopeS
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4 posted 2003-09-16 08:55 AM


thanks Lee ... Yes I write because thoughts of him remain forever etched

Hope

HopeS
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5 posted 2003-09-16 08:59 AM


thanks Marge .... yes it was a nice surprise from LovingYou.com , that poem was written
9/1/03, I guess they are a little behind

Hope

HopeS
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6 posted 2003-09-16 09:01 AM


Huge thanks Symour , I appreciate you comment
Hope

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