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Aenimal
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the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-09-16 02:16 AM



pain bleeds through skin
is it love or subjugation
you seek
dog?
illusions
crawl beneath the skin
you never stay
you never leave
and i left
casting questions
into the air
as if i expected
a response
as if you'd existed
how does it end dog?
a lachrymose reconcilement?
a feast for the dead alive again?
keep your heaven
and your hell
we both know
thy will is dumb
as mine is numb
and all i really need
is sleep

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-09-16 03:08 AM


yeah Raph, me too
Sunshine
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2 posted 2003-09-16 10:11 AM



Sleep, Man!  When you're rested,
come do it again!

MARK V SHELDON
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3 posted 2003-09-16 10:24 AM


Hate is a consuming venom that rapes its toll...

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

serametheicebound
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4 posted 2003-09-16 10:33 AM


That was very good.It deserves to be read the whole day.Keep posting staff like this...
Cpat Hair
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5 posted 2003-09-16 10:54 AM


How long hate
can you pick at these
blind eyes
and not let me sleep?

Even the vulture
finds his fill
and leaves the dead


alone


Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
6 posted 2003-09-16 12:20 PM


Thanks just a little sick of the dog
littlewing
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7 posted 2003-09-16 01:33 PM


ahh Raph . . . yes yes I know this I do
the write . . .

keep your heaven
and your hell
we both know
thy will is dumb
as mine is numb

powerful lines
and execution
xxoo

icebox
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in the shadows
8 posted 2003-09-16 01:37 PM


"a feast for the dead..."

Truly!

...but of course, we'll sleep when we're dead!

*smile*

bsquirrel
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9 posted 2003-09-16 04:39 PM


You yell at the dog more eloquently than I do, Raph.
Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
10 posted 2003-09-16 05:26 PM


...ouch..
Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
11 posted 2003-09-16 09:04 PM


thanks Sue i know you do, keep their claws off billy

ice i hope so, i really hope so grins

Mike I'm limited by the censors grins

Aye Meg, that's the feeling

littlewing
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12 posted 2003-09-17 01:19 PM


SUEISM Raph . . . SUEISM
(claws . . . yes *shuddering*)
that made me laugh though
thank you

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