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Fall .............Haiku......Chain, Anyone?
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Fall .............Haiku......Chain, Anyone? |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass 
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Over the world's edge, The autumn sun, flinging gold. It spatters the leaves. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Bleeding in colours overtones of season membered pouring out the fall |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Autumn's canvas waits Paint in splattering of fall Brush the stroke of time Lovely, Ed.  When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace. -Jimi Hendrix [This message has been edited by vlraynes (09-16-2003 12:03 AM).] |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
She leaves, and I fall A brisk breeze of sanguine love Golden memories -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
+*+*+ Summer falls away Into a peaceful slumber. Autumn claims gold crown. +*+*+ |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
winter's leafless tree is larger than it appears as the evening fades |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Last call for summer was painted in bright colors on Gods blank canvas |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Autumn leaves fall as Coverlet to blanket earth Neath hibernal snows |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
translating the world's great living letters of space and time, fall with it's stunning variety of mvoing significance awarded to all. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
stay with me summer let me linger in your sun bronze me on the beach ~*~ clouds carried the change storm swept skies spoke of seasons fall fell from heaven ~*~ Monarchs on the move Indian Summer whispers September moon calls ~*~ summer fades to fall green gives way to amber's glow nothing gold can stay ~~~~~~~ ack...see what you've started...now i will be talking in syllable counts all day.  "If you hear teardrops falling like rain on the rooftops ... |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
She brings me haiku, draws them from my very soul ...haiku without words ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Frail fingers of leaves Curling in one final grasp Only to hold air |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Touched by Fall’s cool breeze the leaves tremble sadly and blush soothed by the sun’s kiss [This message has been edited by Margherita (09-16-2003 10:01 AM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Floating on stillness dropped colors become boats sailing summer gone |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Silence creeps slow, Soon snowflakes shall settle white A hush becomes us |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Though the leaves are gray and snow heaps in the fence rows, still the sun rises. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Bronze and golden leaves Blinding bright of clear blue sky Fall is here at last |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
This fall in dying is only a beginning to flowers in spring |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Where are the quilts, dear Jack Frost painting our windows Crystalizing dreams |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
brown is turning leaves cool touches the morning air fall is on the way |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
The sea moves in tides A leaf flutters in farewell~ A bluebird flies south. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Redbirds standing ground They become Song of Winter Red gems glittering |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Fair the morning cool slow warmed when clouds absolve sky of guilty gray |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Leaves on trees let go Drifting to the ground around Falling they astound~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Reminding everyone that change is everywhere in every part of life ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "Vision without action is a daydream. Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
quixotic desire holds to euphoric denial cold follows wild geese |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
branches dipped in gold behold, autumn paints itself in warm earthy hues [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (09-16-2003 12:40 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
One by one, circling down to earth, these yellow birds, these frail, falling leaves. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
rustling neath my feet like discarded gift paper tinted fallen leaves ~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Watch hoarfrost cover Skeletal trees, winter's scene Fall faded too fast [This message has been edited by Sunshine (09-16-2003 03:20 PM).] |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
a little out of the norm here...(me) this is beautiful and and everyone that added makes it even more so....lovely sir... Lauren~ The way you move me |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
The green willow branch Hearing the swan's farewell call, Shivers in the breeze. |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
Weep not for the frost. Death n'er looked more radiant Concealed beginnings. Locked beneath turned leaf. Balance of the sky in tears. Saving for next year. Cherish the good memories of the past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. But above all... be kind to yourself today. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Slightly out of step with autumn shades; her eyes green though her voice is gold ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Ed...you wrapped it up beautifully! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
A green-eyed woman, so like a green-eyed daisy; they both need pollen. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Such wonderful and diverse haiku's. I've enjoyed reading each and every one. Leaves float softly down Guided by the gusty wind A colorful dance Hear Blessings dropping their blossoms all around you. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
the chains are falling each day we shed leaves of hope within Passion's home |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
As leaves of hope fall They are gathered from all around Held close to the heart |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Ready to sleep now in winter's cold bed, a tree sheds her bright clothing. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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