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smalls
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since 2002-12-20
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0 posted 2003-09-15 07:41 PM


It is time to rest
Putting aside what has been done
And all that we complain about
The day is never wasted
Only energy is wasted
Though it should be abundant
But until our decisions mature
We will continue to get tired.

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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2003-09-15 07:55 PM


I love this...makes me think and then rethink how I live my life.

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mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

2 posted 2003-09-15 09:31 PM


Like the wisdom entailed here. Nice write.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

mytuesdaywishes
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since 2003-09-05
Posts 254
a voice from the musicbox
3 posted 2003-09-16 09:48 PM


"The day is never wasted
Only energy is wasted "

wow...so right. as long as you've had a few laughs, a few tears, a few minutes with the people you love, a day is never wasted. energy is wasted on the little things. thanks for the insight, great work

and even when everything was wrong, and we were mad at the world, it was still beautiful.

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