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Marine Layer.........Choka
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Marine Layer.........Choka |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Marine Layer It has the wrong name, the sound hard, disconcerting, like a metal shroud rolling ashore from the sea... It is worse, really: It creeps in, bringing a chill, as gray clouds block the sunshine. ....for a friend, with sorrow for something I can't define. James A. Fraser [This message has been edited by James_A_Fraser (09-15-2003 05:40 PM).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It creeps in, bringing a chill, as gray clouds block the sunshine. A sorrow you can't define is shared... so that we feel it, too. Excellent work! *S* |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very haunting, James... I can hear the gulls in the distance, searching... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Chilling feeling with this piece... very well explained, much enjoyed. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, dearest friend, my heart goes out to you and your friend! (sad sigh) You speak of the anguish deeply, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
James...A friend that sees and responds this way...is like sunshine! |
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