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vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

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Somewhere... out there...

0 posted 2003-09-15 05:00 PM

Behold...

What beauty, this
in light of
shadows' pass

Alas...
'tis rare
such vision seen
Be not remiss
in undertand...

but say ye true
that all may
hear and
question not
such bind exists
'tween two...
who live and breathe
as one

Dueted souls
in timeless serenade

What beauty, this...

~Vicky L. Raynes

For four wonderful people in share of two beautiful souls...
You know who you are...

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix
[This message has been edited by vlraynes (09-16-2003 04:57 AM).]

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-09-15 05:03 PM

ah..very sweet Vicky..I am sure they will appreciate...

I enjoyed

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-09-15 05:06 PM

Beautiful Vicky!
I'm sure they will love this.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ I love your glances meeting mine
across forever or the room ~

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2003-09-15 05:19 PM

vlraynes
A lovely write, enjoyed the read.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2003-09-15 06:18 PM

VickyMyFriend~
What beauty, indeed~
Just lovely, poetess~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2003-09-15 06:23 PM

Such beauty this...
Timeless write Vicky. TD

wranx
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since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

6 posted 2003-09-15 09:57 PM

I'm quite certain that "the four" are honored by "this" beauty.

Very nice Vicki!...Thoughtful!

Ed

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2003-09-15 10:25 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooooo precious, sweet friend, I know with all my heart these four wonderful people will forever hold this treasure close to their hearts and be framed with their devoted love, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vicky, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

8 posted 2003-09-16 04:42 PM

oooh very very prettyful

Life isn't really all that bad... just don't take it too seriously

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

9 posted 2003-09-16 05:03 PM

Oh, Vicky, this is so beautiful!! You
knew that I would think so, didn't you,
being the believer of romance and true love
the way I am. Two souls bonded as one
is a beautiful thing!!

I know the four you wrote this for love it, too!!

and love
Ethel

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

10 posted 2003-09-16 05:30 PM

nicely penned vicky,,,

Richy
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

11 posted 2003-09-16 05:31 PM

This is Superexcellent!

And the last line, “What beauty, this...

...is simply, gorgeous!

Sensational write!

Richy

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

12 posted 2003-09-17 12:39 PM

God, you surely are my sister . . .
this is utter beauty and quite an honor to the four you so speak of . . .
they are beaming, this I do believe
with all of my heart and soul
Just in complete awe, of this
and you . . .
*smiling*
Vicky, you are a beautiful person
and an astounding poetess
xxoo

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

13 posted 2003-09-17 05:15 PM

See? Sometimes I just
need a little in"light".

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

14 posted 2003-09-17 06:36 PM

Vicky, sweet friend...this is very beautifully written and so meaningful!

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

15 posted 2003-09-17 08:50 PM

Dueted souls
in timeless serenade

What beauty, these words

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

16 posted 2003-09-17 08:58 PM

What beauty this IS...

You...are such a loving friend.

so gracious and wise.

MissRhyme
New Member

since 2003-09-15

Posts 3
Ajax, Ontario, CANADA

17 posted 2003-09-18 12:32 PM

This is truly a magnificent poem. Beautiful!

"Love is the irresistible desire to be irresistibly desired" ~Robert Frost

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

18 posted 2003-09-18 01:50 AM

Beautifully penned.

Crystal

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

19 posted 2003-09-18 11:08 AM

Vicky - yes, beauty it is...

BC

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