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Remembering David
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Remembering David |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
His sheltered eyes whispered stories best buried, he begged lest hurried, in crave "We" become... Too much, his touch His lullabye voice- I wished noise troubled my soul troubled my mind trouble my night troubled me... In day light, I see His ambiguous stare whispering stories behind the veil do tell, do tell... ~Tier [This message has been edited by Tiersdin (09-15-2003 01:58 PM).] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
so often warnings go off in our heads, but the deceptive whispers and tantalizing touches can silence them to our hearing fascinating piece, Tiersdin Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
ooooh.. This is hauntingly sad but lovely, Tiers. And, yes lady, awesome writing. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Slightly emotional day and then I read this... I'll have to come back and read it again, Tier... because it struck hard... and I don't think it was just me. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, dear ladies, for your comments and thoughts. VAS, you are right. It's good to be cautious! Thanks for reading! Ser, I felt sad while I was writing it. I'm surprised it came through in the poem. Thanks for the praise! I need it today.  Sun, I agree, emotional day. I hope this didn't bring you down.  ~Tier [This message has been edited by Tiersdin (09-15-2003 02:19 PM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
stunning piece thanks tiers |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Nah, dear... Chaucer and Greensleeves pulled me out of it! |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Aenimal: no, no, thank you! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) I also am saddened by how many deceptively sub-title their true colors behind a convincing smile, dearest friend, those are the true cowards and their lies will only give them what they deserve: dissatisfaction! (sad sigh) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet R.T, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my Tier...this aches...deep. Hauntingly sad...very well done. ~Hugs & Soft Smiles, Nancy~ ~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~ |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Yes indeedy, this is that thing you do so well! Wonderful! Ed |
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