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mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

0 posted 2003-09-15 01:23 PM

It came to me again:
That warmth, from a memory captured,
when the green grass watched
as we waltzed with the summer winds -
We both knew.
Suggesting, so carefree now we’re apart:
Our laughter sealing the good times.
As, our dreams came with ease
You did own the seasons - we knew,
And only to share, was important.
When all felt right - with even
The wrong of it.
For our next day - will always be there:
It always is - for us – forever.

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

Bonfirelight
Member

since 2003-06-19

Posts 85
London, England

1 posted 2003-09-15 01:44 PM

Really good.
evokes some memory...and thats what we all want eh? thanks.

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

2 posted 2003-09-15 09:13 PM

Thanks bonfirelight, Glad you enjoyed it. This is a tough forum to post in, because it moves so fast. Thanks again for commenting.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

mytuesdaywishes
Member

since 2003-09-05

Posts 254
a voice from the musicbox

3 posted 2003-09-15 11:29 PM

i love your style. it makes me think of so many friends ive lost along the way, so many goodtimes. so many lives lived in this one. you are a great and passionate writer.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2003-09-15 11:35 PM

"You did own the seasons - we knew,
And only to share, was important.
When all felt right - with even
The wrong of it."

Love these lines, and love the awakening of
memories that this brings. Nicely done.
Hugs,
~Vicky
When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

5 posted 2003-09-15 11:40 PM

Sweet one mysticpoe

I like it.

:-)

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

6 posted 2003-09-16 08:27 AM

mytuesdaywishes, vlraynes and froggy. Thanks to all of you for taking the time to read and comment. Thanks again for stopping by.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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