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vandana
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0 posted 2003-09-15 10:26 AM


Iam back again
In this cold weather
turns into a snow
Driving through this
lonely road
Iam back
on a same track
Keeping my faith
Keeping the love
In my mind
Wandering away
Thinking about love
that drift away
Iam back
to this same old road
Searching for love
Loooking for you
Iam here
back on the road again
Driving through
this stromy weather
Looking for you
My heart says that
I will find you
If Iam back
on the road again
If I find you
Back again
It will be the best of love
I ever have
So Iam here
back on the road again
road again....

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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-09-15 10:31 AM


very good,,,

                               

EvocativeVerse2
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2 posted 2003-09-15 10:37 AM


Intersting! It has almost a song like quality to it! Well done.
KristieSue
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3 posted 2003-09-15 10:43 AM


never lose sight of what you want, or hope...

"Vision without action is a daydream.  Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb
~ KS

angelblueyes
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4 posted 2003-09-15 10:46 AM


If it's truly what you want then go after it.I loved the beat I could hear in my head as I read this.
Crystal

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5 posted 2003-09-15 04:46 PM




(smiles) And your golden heart will get just what it desires, for good things come to those who wait and dream! (kiss on cheek) May the road you're on bring you to the yellow brick road of happiness, sweet friend, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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