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Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

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0 posted 2003-09-15 02:26 AM

Swim?

The little
pool ripples,
bare breasted,
teasing the
sunshine

and

you read me,
your quiet
smile more
welcoming
than
she

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-09-15 02:39 AM

great write,,,,

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

2 posted 2003-09-15 02:49 AM

Damn...
this is really well done..
Saving it...

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

3 posted 2003-09-15 03:59 AM

great stuff!

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

4 posted 2003-09-15 06:36 AM

are we going to have to start calling you Mr. Romance?...h

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2003-09-15 07:31 AM

sending hugs...smiles and well wishes for a great day....

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2003-09-15 09:46 AM

Ed...such quietly romantic imagery in this little beauty....Loved it!

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

7 posted 2003-09-15 09:52 AM

Yes...the waters soft caress...almost as soft as a lovers

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

8 posted 2003-09-15 09:52 AM

Very sweet..lovely to read! Yet another one that seems to be soft like a whisper.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

9 posted 2003-09-15 10:10 AM

very nice... the imagery and the flow adding to the idea...
well done Ed.. well done indeed

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2003-09-15 10:10 AM

enjoyed

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

11 posted 2003-09-15 10:50 AM

sweet...

"Vision without action is a daydream. Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb
~ KS

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

12 posted 2003-09-15 10:52 AM

This was spoken with such softness and tenderness that it touched my heart.

Crystal

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

13 posted 2003-09-15 11:18 AM

Many facets of reflection here...

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

14 posted 2003-09-15 11:23 AM

Ed, you are becoming quite the romantic writer, you know.
I remember that I read in a comment of yours right after you came here that it was hard for you
to let your feelings out in the romantic poems......
I sure am glad that it got easier!!

Hugs, my friend

Ethel

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

15 posted 2003-09-15 05:39 PM

From a most incredible image that shares relaxation with the reader... to a most tender expression of connection... this is just beautiful! *S* Excellent work! *S*

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