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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-09-15 01:16 AM


Wanting A Woman

I want a woman that's
simple, yet elegant.
Passionate when it
comes to kissing.
Yes, that's an
important element.
Her presence would bring
a smile to my face
knowing she is near.
And she would want me
as much as I want her.
Yes, her devotion
would be sincere.

JamesLee
September15
2003

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MorninGlory
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since 2003-08-30
Posts 175
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1 posted 2003-09-15 01:26 AM


Well, this doesn't seem like too much to ask for - simple, devoted, kind, good kisser.. sounds reasonable to me - nicely written, I have often thought about the kind of man I want, have even written about it, maybe I will post it someday.. Thanks for sharing.

~ becky

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
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2 posted 2003-09-15 01:37 AM


good words written,,,

                               

JilGirl
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since 2003-05-24
Posts 364
Washington
3 posted 2003-09-15 01:53 AM


You know what you want,
~described her well!

If this were a want ad
you'd have 'em lined up
at your door!

Blessings!
Shirl

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

KristieSue
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4 posted 2003-09-15 10:56 AM


good luck :-)

"Vision without action is a daydream.  Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb
~ KS

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
5 posted 2003-09-15 10:59 AM


This isn't too much to ask for in life and I know in my heart that you will find this woman.You will be blissfully happy and tender in everything that you two share.My friend you are one of the few caring, gentle, tender, and amazing men that I've had the pleasure of meeting.
Crystal

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
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missouri
6 posted 2003-09-15 11:00 AM


You always have such a way with the ladies darlin
icebox
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since 2003-05-03
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in the shadows
7 posted 2003-09-15 11:04 AM


A nice poem.

Sometimes, I'd be happy with one who showed up.

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