This Violin Weeps..Inspired by Chopin "Nocturne for Piano and Violin."

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Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

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where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-09-15 01:02 AM

As they painted
the flowers red,
weep sad violin,
bow your head.

We speak in treason,
for centuries of work.
Composition of galaxies,
they created the stars.
The dripping fingernail,
holding the horsehair.

As they held up
their aces high,
moan softly
tiny cello.
Show these notes
how beautifully you cry.

It seems so dark, yet...

Dancing upon a spider's web.
We must breathe deeply,
at how you never quiet.

Oh violin,
why must you weep?
Why does your sorrow seep
down and up my spine?
Your painful echos feel
just as mine..

Crawling soft vine,
dew of tearful intertwine..
A fate as this,
ice below my vein.

Torn, violin,
writing petal upon rose.
Causing gardens to cease their flooding life.

Painting the roses white..

QjQ
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1 posted 2003-09-15 01:09 AM

terrific penning,,,,

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2003-09-15 01:10 AM

Nice writing...James

MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...

3 posted 2003-09-15 01:45 AM

A wonderful choice in music, I must say... and as for your soul-exuding lament... I think even Chopin would be moved.

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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-09-15 06:29 AM

This is poetry in motion, Meghan.

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

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standing on a shadow's lace

5 posted 2003-09-15 06:34 AM

meg...do you KNOW how much i loveeeeeeeee your poetry????...h

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

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6 posted 2003-09-15 07:30 AM

this was amazingly awesome, as is all of your work...

KristieSue

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since 2003-01-31

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7 posted 2003-09-15 10:53 AM

Meg, this was just absolutely, breathtakinly beautiful...

"Vision without action is a daydream. Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb
~ KS

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19

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8 posted 2003-09-15 10:55 AM

This was avsolutely beautiful and amazing from beginning to end.You took my breath away.
Crystal

serenity blaze
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9 posted 2003-09-15 01:07 PM

smile...I write to music quite often m'self.

I loved this megs--a little cinema view of the meditative journey.

smile.

It's nice inside yer head.

bsquirrel

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10 posted 2003-09-15 02:41 PM

Your words take my breath away, Meg.

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space

11 posted 2003-09-15 03:30 PM

simply amazing meglet..for me it's Vivaldi..those strings they weep

IndigoEve
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since 2003-01-10

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Etched in the illusion of time

12 posted 2003-09-15 04:40 PM

What euphony! Into my library, indeed.

For saints have hands that pilgrims' hands do touch,
And palm to palm is holy palmers' kiss.--"Romeo and Juliet"

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

13 posted 2003-09-15 05:10 PM

"Oh violin,
why must you weep?
Why does your sorrow seep
down and up my spine?
Your painful echos feel
just as mine.."

Oh my! This is so beautiful Meg!
Into my library with this lovely.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ I love your glances meeting mine
across forever or the room ~

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