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TwoSided
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since 2003-07-06
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0 posted 2003-09-14 11:34 PM



Boogie Bop Nights


Sway with me phantom
Dance with me demons
Let’s grind and twist
Bump and shake
Till our hearts burst
Down dirty we’ll hit the floor
Ruben flesh sweeten for more
Keep the music flowin D.J
Don’t stop the beat
Press against me lonely stranger
Feel my wild heat
Down low here we go
One last time the D.J spins
He knows the times growen thin
So the whole dance floor starts given the music all they’ve got
Till they got no more
We all adore
This late night pleasure
Of electric ecstasy
When it’s all over and done
Our bodies ache for more
But the usher’s got us marchen out the door
Till next time
When the D.J starts spinen
And the bodies start grooven
While the music still playen.

*Maybe not the right form mates,it's up to you to decide I couldn't*

© Copyright 2003 TwoSided - All Rights Reserved
QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
1 posted 2003-09-15 12:23 PM


the dance of romance is always good,,
enjoyed the write,,

about the right forum i'm not sure?

                               

Bonfirelight
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 85
London, England
2 posted 2003-09-15 01:36 PM


pretty funky. good read, reminds me of late nights and sticky dancefloors in dark loud rooms.
TwoSided
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since 2003-07-06
Posts 19

3 posted 2003-09-15 04:00 PM


Thanks you two very much!
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