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ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
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Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2003-09-14 10:51 PM


Turn this heart
against thy self

one's mistakes

a world apart
beside itself

shiver and quakes

Not one but two
must take the blame

share the bite

escaping, you
turn the flame

black and write
            Look no further than your inner self, dearest Meg.


Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure.   -   C. Belville 02

[This message has been edited by ctowen (09-14-2003 10:52 PM).]

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inkedgoddess
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1 posted 2003-09-14 10:53 PM


okay thats it........
the best is always last
ill be waiting...................

Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
2 posted 2003-09-14 11:11 PM


Thank you so much for this..
A very well done piece, if I may say so myself.

*blushing*

ctowen
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Green Mountains of VT
3 posted 2003-09-14 11:28 PM


I am glad you liked ...
    (with mutual admiration)

SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
4 posted 2003-09-15 12:01 PM


All the best is hoped for Kaoru--she deserves it.
Shara @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Midnitesun
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Gaia
5 posted 2003-09-15 12:41 PM


Smiling, as I think I understand how she must enjoy this write.
Well done, dear poet.

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2003-09-15 03:55 AM


beautiful
1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
7 posted 2003-09-15 06:54 AM


enjoy the painting you are painting of people here...just beautiful...h
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