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SharaRose
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0 posted 2003-09-14 06:15 PM


Temple Of Throb

In this temple of throb,
my temples hurt
when I think of you.
I realize I've been
robbed.
This temple
The body
you took
just because
you knew
you could.
If I had
If I ever had
done it
just for spite
for trifling
then
maybe
you should.
But out on a wire
the temple shook
It's foundation
a trifling thing
for you.
It
was
my
being
I
wonder
will
you
ever
be seeing
what it is
you do?
For-
give-
ness
makes
you
pale.
You
claim
you
divest.
Not
on
account
of me
you
didn't.
You
were given
many
avenues
to
set
it
all free!
It's
an escape
it's an easy
way out
from
doing
what
was
best!

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (09-14-2003 10:14 PM).]

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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-09-14 06:20 PM


terrific you have expressed your feelings well,,,

                            

angelblueyes
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2 posted 2003-09-14 09:58 PM


I love the expression and the form of this.
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3 posted 2003-09-15 01:32 PM




(big hugggsssssss) I too am saddened when so many take the easy way out like cowards, dearest friend, it only shows how fragile they are and automatically proves you are right and deserve so much more! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a heartfelt write, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Shara, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

SharaRose
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4 posted 2003-09-15 08:54 PM


Thank you for your concern Noah. No one is right in this. No person is right, or wrong anymore than the other. I was wrong, he was wrong. Neither are angels, and neither can claim they haven't offended in some way so why not just make a resolve, and move on from there. Let bygones be bygones, and leave it. Thank you for reading, and I appreciate your comments, always.

God Bless, and keep you always close to him.


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Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

QjQ
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5 posted 2003-09-16 02:18 AM


                                

littlewing
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6 posted 2003-09-17 01:23 PM


Shara:

I must quote Sir Elton here:

" . . . while Mona Lisa's and Mad Hatters
sons of bankers, sons of lawyers;
turn around and say good morning to the night . . ."


xxoo

SharaRose
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7 posted 2003-09-20 12:39 PM


And that I could do if there wasn't someone there to trash me constantly. Leaves a bad taste doesn't it. Well that's what this person does to me all the time. It's very poor taste to trash people so why wouldn't it be forced to be brought to the open sooner of later in that light. You know the one. The light of bad taste.
Shara~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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