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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2003-09-14 05:56 PM


TWENTY OR LESS…#160

Copyright 2003 by:Mark V Sheldon


Ancient souls absorbing

scarlet-stained hearts overflowing

earth saturated and bulging


its support quota filled


You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

© Copyright 2003 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-09-14 06:04 PM


Excellent as always Mark!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

      ~ Summer can't be over...
   I still have sand in my shoes ~

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2003-09-14 09:24 PM


good to see you Mark..I have been having a few bits..but not much under 20 lately
M

angelblueyes
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3 posted 2003-09-14 09:26 PM


Mark, glad to see you again. This spoke volumes.
Crystal

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Gaia
4 posted 2003-09-15 12:27 PM


Yes, sad to say, this is true.
Mother Earth would prefer to be anemic.

MARK V SHELDON
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5 posted 2003-09-15 12:39 PM


to you, Nancy.

Maureen:  I'll have to check out your bits...    Thank you for the welcome.

Hi Crystal -- thank you for the .

Kacy:  I wonder if ticks ever question what they're doing to the dog...?

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

JilGirl
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6 posted 2003-09-15 02:20 AM


Great write!
An attention getter!

Blessings!
Shirl

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Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

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7 posted 2003-09-15 06:38 AM


rain on...h
LeeJ
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8 posted 2003-09-15 07:21 AM


all is washed away into a realm of memory that doesn't seem to matter anymore...what we once thought so inhumanly large and overwhelming, floats within the serenity of a purpose of which we are oft times not even aware.....

Wonderful write my friend.

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9 posted 2003-09-15 07:28 AM


Great!!!

                                

[This message has been edited by QjQ (09-15-2003 07:30 AM).]

MARK V SHELDON
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10 posted 2003-09-15 10:50 AM


Shirl:  Thank you for the attention...

Helen:  40 days and 40 nights...

LeeJ:  Thank you.  Will man ever concede that he really knows nothing...?

Q:  Thank you...

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

KristieSue
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11 posted 2003-09-15 10:53 AM


love it :-p

"Vision without action is a daydream.  Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb
~ KS

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12 posted 2003-09-15 11:00 AM


social commentary masking perhaps the underlying personal connections to such feelings...

nicely done Mark.

MARK V SHELDON
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13 posted 2003-09-15 11:09 AM


KristieSue -- then it was worth it...  

Ron:  Perhaps...  

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

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14 posted 2003-09-15 12:57 PM




(big hugggssssss) Mother Nature never wanted to change her figure, she is happy just making her wardrobe raw, natural, and organic! (sad sigh) It depresses me imagining man continuing to tear her apart and then one day when nothing is left every man regrets what he did and wishes to get it all back but it is impossible to! (wipes tears) Your heart shines with wonderful commentary, dearest friend, I respect your sincerity ever so much, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
15 posted 2003-09-15 03:35 PM


grins, you know i like this..great to see you Mark
MARK V SHELDON
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16 posted 2003-09-15 03:39 PM


Thank you, Noah, fellow sentient.  As long as we as individuals do our best not to contribute to the metastasis of cancerous humanity -- at least we'll have a relatively clear conscience when it's time to "pay back the loan"...

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

MARK V SHELDON
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17 posted 2003-09-15 03:40 PM


You too, Raph -- and...  what's to like...?

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

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