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"Here, Here!" exclaimed the Rice Krispies
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"Here, Here!" exclaimed the Rice Krispies |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
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Lately, I've been thinking, and I think we all agree-- we had a meeting just tonight regarding egocentricy and the measure of the truth divided by the need of proof multiplied unto the nth according to my need of sum... Lately I've been thinking that perhaps I think too much. That was just before the "snap"-- I should have heeded crackling. I should have listened to the voice of silence echoing the "pop." I should have done a lot of things, and others best would left undone... Lately? I've been thinking. You think I think too much? |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
me too...yes way tooooooooooo much...h |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
according to my need of some...? Yes, definately too much! *grin* Lub ya witch! ~yeti |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you can never think too much...especially over a bowl of cereal |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"Lately I've been thinking that perhaps I think too much." Oh...how I know this feeling... Love this...love YOU...  When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace. -Jimi Hendrix [This message has been edited by vlraynes (09-14-2003 05:57 AM).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Methinks I hear something crackling here...  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Yes yes but is a good thing If you didnt, then we wouldnt lubdub ya xxoo |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
No more than moi.  |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
I think all poets think too much....lol hugs, g "Now would you mind if I bared my soul / If I came right out and said you're beautiful..." B. Adams |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Well of course you do K, it's genetic.  Ya know, I'm moving near the town where the man who invented those little snap, crackle, pop guys is from. How's that for some useless morning trivia?? |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I wonder if I, myself, would be thinking too much if I thought about how much you are thinking! lol  Cute write! I like how you spill your thoughts out!  EA [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-14-2003 10:44 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
My mind is always abuzz.. snap..crackle...pop! I enjoyed this! Love ya lady! ~Hugs~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
I wonder which one told you that..Snap? Krackle? Or Pop? Inform them if you didn't you wouldn't write the same...and what ya think about that!? hehehe  Shara @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I should have done a lot of things, and others best would left undone... Lately? I've been thinking. You think I think too much? Oh goodness, yes, I do!! Karen, I know that I think entirely too much at times. [This message has been edited by garysgirl (09-14-2003 02:24 PM).] |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Here, Here! Lovely poem Serenity Blaze. Love the line...lately I've been thinking that perhjaps I think to much. I know that feeling. Sometimes I only get 3 hours sleep at night because my mind goes into overdrive and won't shut down. This really touched me. Thanks! |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
lmao...just make sure the next POP sound we hear isn't your brain exploding from excessive thought! LOVE the title! "Vision without action is a daydream. Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb ~ KS [This message has been edited by KristieSue (09-15-2003 10:49 AM).] |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Lady I'm sure you do, as do the rest of us.But that's what gives you the great words to write and to let you shine for who you are.  Crystal |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
It ain't the thinking too much darlin...its the talking back to yourself teehee |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks for reading. I'm cracking up here, recalling the early eighties. I used to be addicted cocaine then--and? chuckle--if ya'll think I'm annoying NOW? Y'shoulda known me then! Those Rice Krispies NEVER shut up! Thanks for reading. And now? A moment of silence for Cocaine Karen.  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What's thinking? *innocent look* Sorry...couldn't resist being blonde! LOL But nah... keep on keeping on... for I'm enjoying the results! *G* |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
shes talking to the rice crispies...and they're talking back  And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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