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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2003-09-13 10:46 PM




These twilight passages of
Folded purple rain
Misted first, a cool fog
Lightly glistening
The out stretched arms of solitude

Then building in it’s steady
Pour, the soothe of natures
Rhythmic gathering
All is quiet…soft and silent pattering

A melody of relaxation,
Sweet the leaves in saturation
Cool breathes…the fond awakening
Of crisper climates

Calm, until the lightest stir of
Balmy whispers…flutter through my
Open window, sweeping eyelets

Half-mast thinking
A lullaby to send the end
Of weary…
To the sands of gentle hands
Shy are these caresses pausing…
Slipped to dream

Copyright Kkh 9/13/03

[This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (09-14-2003 03:38 PM).]

© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
QjQ
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1 posted 2003-09-13 10:48 PM


Calm, until the lightest stir of
Balmy whispers…flutter through my
Open window, sweeping eyelets


loved these lines,,
terrific read,,

                           

Wind
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2 posted 2003-09-13 10:53 PM


this gives lovely images.

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

Enchantress
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3 posted 2003-09-13 10:54 PM


Very beautiful as always Kathleen...
Lovely...lovely.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

      ~ Summer can't be over...
   I still have sand in my shoes ~

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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4 posted 2003-09-14 08:49 AM


Kathleen:

this brought me to sweet breezy slumber
your words consoled me here
thank you
beautiful writing, as always
xxoo

Patricia
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5 posted 2003-09-14 09:08 AM


Your words speak this Sunday.  Just beautiful, TD.

Patricia  

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6 posted 2003-09-14 02:41 PM


Beautifully written,  so soft and fragile.
Such delicate passages...  Very well done
TD..

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