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Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
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east coast

0 posted 2003-09-13 06:11 PM



I too felt the chill of winter
On the edge of fall

Not even the burn of red
Orange, & gold can warm
These drafty places

Our flame
Once believed eternal
Flickers desperately in
hopes of another season

But alas, no fuel to feed
The fire and how the
Shadows grow...

I too felt the chill of
Winter on the edge of fall

Take my hand, darling

Leap!

We shall tumble only
A little while...


~Tier





[This message has been edited by Tiersdin (09-15-2003 12:36 PM).]

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littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-09-13 06:23 PM


Tier . . .
there was beautiful music
playing as I read . . .
an orchestra of angels actually
to compliment your words
and yes, only for a bit can I see you tumbling, if at all

You truly amaze me
xxoo


Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455

2 posted 2003-09-13 06:25 PM


"We shall tumble only
A little while..."

It'll only feel like a thousand years, huh?
I see we're walkin' the same plank again.  

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
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east coast
3 posted 2003-09-13 06:42 PM


LW, if indeed there were angels, you were one of them- cute little wings and all!

Dunc, we're twins after all, remember?

Luv,
Tier

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4 posted 2003-09-13 06:45 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Autumn is inevitable, but it also doesn't mean that all can't be sorted out and talked over, for if you sow love, you will reap it too but what remains is the bulbs in the ground that will only sprout perennial gifts! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet R.T, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

wranx
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
5 posted 2003-09-13 11:41 PM


Good lord Tier!

This is as good as any....Really

Awesome!

Ed...

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
6 posted 2003-09-14 12:00 PM


wonderful ending!
mytuesdaywishes
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since 2003-09-05
Posts 254
a voice from the musicbox
7 posted 2003-09-15 11:05 PM


fall has such static magic in the air. but times change with the leaves, and no one spoke it so beautifully as you did. nothing gold can stay.


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