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dreams turn to real |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk 
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Lost in a world that’s not my own Trapped till I find the truth here I stay forever in my dream Not knowing im here Every touch so real, every smell, Every sense, active in this fantasy Days go by and by Thinking if I die will I awaken In my own world Yet I don’t know my own world Or what it would be like So used to this fantasy Yet still wishing I could escape Back to the world where my life awaits Unknown steps onto a new path Things that ive learnt holding my hand Helping me through Everyone I see in this fantasy world Maybe awaits in the ones not dreamt Just delaying their life Till they figure it out I long to wait up my time will come To that world of unknown paradise Where everything is just right This dream that I live is just a given time To adjust to my feelings Before I unleash my truth self upon the world Death is a blessing an end to the dream All lessons learnt more to be seen Don’t be scared it’s ok to awake Your life waits till your souls complete Slowly growing up in this so called dream Till its sent on to the real world Where the adult souls roam |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The dreams of a young man's world...to leave the auspices of a child's dream, to those of the adult world, is indeed, a small "death" of sorts. So many young people don't realize that adults still hang on to their dreams too...and struggle hard to make them a reality. So, we're not really all that different, it seems... Well done, Lee. I enjoyed the metaphors...thank you! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lee, I thought you had abandoned us! Good to see that you're back! Lee, perhaps it is life that is but a dream.  I enjoy reading your ponderances. You have an imaginitive, philosophical and highly creative mind--and I always read your poems twice to look for the deeper meanings. Welcome back, Dear Stone of Red! Loves 'n hugs, EA |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
where the adult souls roam Impressive write, as always. You are living your life intensely while you try to find answers. We are all on this path, trying to learn. Dreams are part of it, even if it seems they are located in a paralell world. Love, Margherita  |
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