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Open Poetry #28
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Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641
Calif.
0 posted 2003-09-13 02:21 PM




Pretending that I’m busy
Not on task though
Viewing
Listening
To the parts of you
That cause the butterflies
Soul swelling Love dizzies

You
Engaged in mindless chatter
With all the kids
Each one
Singled out
Feeling so special
Knowing there so very loved
Hearts content in their laughter

To all of us you give
Kissalations
Snuggleations

These are the fruits
Of our soul sensations
© Copyright 2003 Connie McDonald - All Rights Reserved
arthur
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 678
england
1 posted 2003-09-13 02:25 PM

liked it-i can even forgive the word smithing to make the rythem
made me smile-and thats not easy
arthur
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
2 posted 2003-09-13 03:31 PM

To all of us you give
Kissalations
Snuggleations

These are the fruits
Of our soul sensations


I loved the word smithing and do it all the time...makes it your thoughts and special

M
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