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Witch Of November Falling
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Witch Of November Falling |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Split the gash Jagged lightning flash Tore clouds to bleed With rumbled echoes plead “Hear me, please?” this very core the soul resides and I this night am ripped inside… “Heal me..” once the drops begin a rattled tattled sound of tin I can not in any dry Clot this falling churning sky But follow suit of runnel sound Until the best of me is drowned “sleep now, and try.” Roil the heavens as I perceive The passing tides and falling leaves Race the hands around the face Would be this stare a search For grace. [This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (09-13-2003 01:00 PM).] |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"But follow suit of runnel sound Until the best of me is drowned “sleep now, and try.” Roil the heavens as I perceive The passing tides and falling leaves Race the hands around the face Would be this stare a search For grace." A site for weary eyes, your writing is. Every word. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"once the drops begin a rattled tattled sound of tin I can not in any dry Clot this falling churning sky But follow suit of runnel sound Until the best of me is drowned “sleep now, and try.”" Ron...this digs deep...touches the very gut of me. Incredible writing...all of it. Hugs to you, friend...  When the power of love overcomes the |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I love this one Ron...felt the rumblings love these wordings: Race the hands around the face Would be this stare a search For grace. a softness there... M |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
You make my soul roil in want. Wanting more of this stuff, Ron. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"“sleep now, and try.” sigh. There always seems to be a proviso, huh? You look good skyclad, Cap. OR... "Izzat a conical hat you're wearing or are you just glad to see me?"  Loved this.  Hugs you. (oooops. heh heh. Watch that "cone" buddy...) |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
l@ved this |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I do swear the seas you're sailing today are high up in the clouds... this is an excellent writing, and it's going to your very own shelf... in my house. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Straight to the heart... ~Tier  |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
looks like you've conjured up another powerful spell Ron... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
as I am sitting here listening to, "Strange Brew" . . . “Hear me, please?” this very core the soul resides and I this night am ripped inside… “Heal me..” May you be heard Ron (for us all) xxoo |
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