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Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641
Calif.

0 posted 2003-09-13 11:42 AM



Come to me
Let us meet
In the night sky
Show me the universe
Through your eyes
Eyes that shine
Far greater
Then all the stars
Heaven has offered

Come to me
Clear and pure
As our hearts
In youth once were
Thoughts of our
Romance
Warm me
When were apart
I long only
For the rhythm
Of your heart

Come to me Love
Rest your head
Upon my breasts
Free yourself
In turn
Freeing me

© Copyright 2003 Connie McDonald - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-09-13 11:57 AM


That's a wakeup call he shouldn't miss.
Wishing the answer you wish for, Connie.

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace
2 posted 2003-09-13 12:34 PM


beautiful...h
SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
3 posted 2003-09-13 12:49 PM


"Free yourself
In turn
Freeing me"

I know of this. Felt it many times. Thanks for sharing this write.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

MorninGlory
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since 2003-08-30
Posts 175
Oklahoma
4 posted 2003-09-13 01:12 PM


This is very nice, tender indeed. I like.

~ becky

Cpat Hair
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5 posted 2003-09-17 09:52 AM


ah.. this tender plea..and offering of solace and freedom...does indeed speak of love..

may it always be yours..

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