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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Finally sun split for me to arrive upon the grass spilled rolled curls grey~black as if by mistake it feels as though I arrived early before the end of this day that merged it's set and rise and became something different after months of same something else warms midnight skin like his voice gravel scratch in song no more you and I long wait behind whilst feet still ache from all the standing my ground bathe skin to soft touch again in moonlight medicine skies dressed up in black as did I yet we never mourn no more everything is all right. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
gem, I have no idea what you are of who is feeding your brain over there, but please keep this going . . . God, you are writing like mind-numbing stuff here Lady it feels as though I arrived early before the end of this day that merged it's set and rise and became something different after months of same Oh please I pray this to be true , for us all I like you like this Beautiful, astounding flowing off the screen onto the desk and now look: I have all this beauty in front of me thank you gemma truly xxoo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
gem, could you please gift me with a few drops of your velvety muse potion? I'd be ever so grateful! --and it wouldn't hurt for you to have an extra "angel" in your pocket! lol  Very fine writing, Dear One!  LL |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...!!! Eric |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Volare! Yes you fly so easily on the waves of your beautiful inspiration! Great write. Love, Margherita  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
keep flyin TF grin |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nice penning n read,,, |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
very powerful gemma always a pleasure |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
i keap..this..two  And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Finally sun split for me to arrive upon the grass spilled rolled curls grey~black as if by mistake it feels as though I arrived early before the end of this day that merged it's set and rise and became something different after months of same Oh Gemma, this is soooooo great, my friend. Keep that smile, sweetie.  Hugs to you  Ethel Mae |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Awwwwwww, I could feel the tangible beauty of these words just like lotion breeze against my face, yay, this is gorgeous, I love it, your poetry always has charm to it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
and this new day, conceived giving birth to life Old style crossed over with modern twists!  Good Morning! |
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