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Aenimal
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the ass-end of space


0 posted 09-13-2003 03:04 AM       View Profile for Aenimal   Email Aenimal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Aenimal

across a desertland
of broken dreams
souls worn thin

what time does not
ravage slowly
regret quickly will

© Copyright 2003 raphael giuffrida - All Rights Reserved
vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...


1 posted 09-13-2003 03:09 AM       View Profile for vlraynes   Email vlraynes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit vlraynes's Home Page   View IP for vlraynes


I like this, Raph.  Much said in just
a few well-chosen words.  Nicely done.
Hugs,
~Vicky

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow


2 posted 09-13-2003 03:16 AM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kaoru

Raph, Who l*ves ya, baby?
gemjop
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3 posted 09-13-2003 06:19 AM       View Profile for gemjop   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gemjop

One of my faves from you, nice to see it again.

Oh Raphael, have I got a story for you! It's not that good, but it involves a near brush (kind of) lol, with Mr Jones.

missed ya, you old hag.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

littlewing
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4 posted 09-13-2003 08:12 AM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

and you have just peeked into my very soul with your words . . .
*smile*
please get back in here and write more often . . .
Sue
xxoo
Susan Caldwell
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5 posted 09-13-2003 12:15 PM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan Caldwell

Yep...

Susan
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light


6 posted 09-13-2003 12:20 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

"Regret" can drain us of the energy that we may still have left. However, I do have a feeling for where you are coming from.

Extra loving hugs,
EA
1slick_lady
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7 posted 09-13-2003 12:46 PM       View Profile for 1slick_lady   Email 1slick_lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit 1slick_lady's Home Page   View IP for 1slick_lady

r...yes it does...and you inspire me i will post reply later...ty ...h
SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~


8 posted 09-13-2003 12:53 PM       View Profile for SharaRose   Email SharaRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SharaRose

It's just human. We can't get it right every time. Can't beat yourself up about it. Learn from it, and move forward being a little wiser than when going in. Thanks for sharing.

SharaRose @-->--


Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (09-13-2003 12:57 PM).]

Margherita
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9 posted 09-13-2003 01:51 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Ciao Raffaele!
Your thoughts neat and your words sharp as a razor.
Even though it sounds pessimistic, it's maybe an invitation to let go of regrets, living fully in the now, dreaming new dreams.
Sogna ancora, Raf!
Abbracci. Margherita
Aenimal
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the ass-end of space


10 posted 09-13-2003 02:05 PM       View Profile for Aenimal   Email Aenimal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aenimal

Thanks everybody, letting go would be nice i know but knowing is always easier than doing..blah
Jason Lyle
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With my darkling


11 posted 09-13-2003 04:19 PM       View Profile for Jason Lyle   Email Jason Lyle   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jason Lyle

Nice write Raph, I regret every single regret...

Jason
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12 posted 09-13-2003 04:56 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

sometimes..it is so good, i wish that they were longer

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

Dark Angel
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13 posted 06-25-2005 06:03 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

I have no words....

but promise me something next time we speak?

smack me over the head. ok?

meh

mxx

Oh, you speak to me in riddles
and you speak to me in rhymes
My body aches to breathe your breath
Your words keep me alive
~Sarah McLachlan~

 
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