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Aenimal
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the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-09-13 03:04 AM


across a desertland
of broken dreams
souls worn thin

what time does not
ravage slowly
regret quickly will


© Copyright 2003 raphael giuffrida - All Rights Reserved
vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
1 posted 2003-09-13 03:09 AM



I like this, Raph.  Much said in just
a few well-chosen words.  Nicely done.
Hugs,
~Vicky

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
2 posted 2003-09-13 03:16 AM


Raph, Who l*ves ya, baby?
gemjop
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3 posted 2003-09-13 06:19 AM


One of my faves from you, nice to see it again.

Oh Raphael, have I got a story for you! It's not that good, but it involves a near brush (kind of) lol, with Mr Jones.

missed ya, you old hag.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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4 posted 2003-09-13 08:12 AM


and you have just peeked into my very soul with your words . . .
*smile*
please get back in here and write more often . . .
Sue
xxoo

Susan Caldwell
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5 posted 2003-09-13 12:15 PM


Yep...

Susan

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2003-09-13 12:20 PM


"Regret" can drain us of the energy that we may still have left. However, I do have a feeling for where you are coming from.

Extra loving hugs,
EA

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
7 posted 2003-09-13 12:46 PM


r...yes it does...and you inspire me i will post reply later...ty ...h
SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
8 posted 2003-09-13 12:53 PM


It's just human. We can't get it right every time. Can't beat yourself up about it. Learn from it, and move forward being a little wiser than when going in. Thanks for sharing.

SharaRose @-->--


Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (09-13-2003 12:57 PM).]

Margherita
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Eternity
9 posted 2003-09-13 01:51 PM


Ciao Raffaele!
Your thoughts neat and your words sharp as a razor.
Even though it sounds pessimistic, it's maybe an invitation to let go of regrets, living fully in the now, dreaming new dreams.
Sogna ancora, Raf!
Abbracci. Margherita

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
10 posted 2003-09-13 02:05 PM


Thanks everybody, letting go would be nice i know but knowing is always easier than doing..blah
Jason Lyle
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With my darkling
11 posted 2003-09-13 04:19 PM


Nice write Raph, I regret every single regret...

Jason

Wind
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12 posted 2003-09-13 04:56 PM


sometimes..it is so good, i wish that they were longer

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

Dark Angel
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13 posted 2005-06-25 06:03 AM


I have no words....

but promise me something next time we speak?

smack me over the head. ok?

meh

mxx

Oh, you speak to me in riddles
and you speak to me in rhymes
My body aches to breathe your breath
Your words keep me alive
~Sarah McLachlan~

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