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froggy
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0 posted 2003-09-12 10:17 PM


The woman holds a letter close to her heart;
With pages faded, tattered and torn.

Tears in her eyes she remembered his words;
His words of love and promises.

Promises of love forever, and for richer or poorer.
So many years together, along with many heartaches
But they always managed to survive.

Today she said ‘I do’ as she remarried the man who
So long ago chose her to be his bride.

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garysgirl
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1 posted 2003-09-12 10:44 PM


Promises of love forever, and for richer or poorer.
So many years together, along with many heartaches
But they always managed to survive.

Today she said ‘I do’ as she remarried the man who
So long ago chose her to be his bride.



This is so sweet. I love it,
especially the ending.
Hugs  
Ethel

SharaRose
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2 posted 2003-09-12 10:53 PM


What a sweet thing to read. Lovely!! Enjoyed much! --Hugs came to mind

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

froggy
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since 2003-06-23
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3 posted 2003-09-13 08:37 PM


Glad you ladies enjoyed this poem.
I wrote it after watching show about world 2.

Thank-you so much for the sweet comments.

:-)

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