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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2003-09-12 07:28 PM



I'm Gonna Live Forever
~*Marge Tindal*~

I'm gonna live forever
or at least until the sun goes down
Then I'm gonna rise on the morrow
and give it another go 'round~

Gonna spend the days in merriment
until I am old and spent
Got a long, long time to get there
yet a short, short row to hoe~

I'm gonna live forever
until it's time to go~


*Inspired by me sweet buddy, SuthernGal ...
so long ago she probably doesn't remember*

Now IF you had a live post here on this particular subject
I'd just reply poetically there ...
but ... seeing as how ya' don't
I'll just post it as a NEW TOPIC with a note of INSPIRE !

Reply poetically on my thread, iffen ya' wanna, ANYTIME !
You too, ToeMan~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com   

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SmartChick
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1 posted 2003-09-12 07:35 PM


Yes, my friend, you are going to live forever. And, some day I hope I will be able to come see you. Hugs to you.
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-09-12 07:58 PM


Marge,You are a sweety,
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3 posted 2003-09-12 08:17 PM


I hope you do, by gum....and that Suthern lass as well! You did good!

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nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2003-09-12 08:27 PM


  you have such a great sense of...
well everything
M

Martie
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5 posted 2003-09-12 08:51 PM


Marge, sweet sis.......ME TOO!  
MorninGlory
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6 posted 2003-09-12 09:31 PM


I can tell there is some history here, but even without it, this is a great piece of work, I like the idea, gonna live forever.. until time to go! Carpe diem!!

~ becky

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7 posted 2003-09-12 09:45 PM


A troublemaker, that's what you be
Reminds me of that bird Casey...
Both of you have ways of flight
But you are much more a delight!
You are dear and oh, so clever
I hope, my friend, you live forever!

LOLOLOLOLOL... With you in my corner, I've a smile for the world... Love you, lady! *S*

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8 posted 2003-09-12 10:42 PM


Great write and enjoyed the poem.

:-)

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9 posted 2003-09-13 01:36 AM


Dear Marge:  If only you could!! If only we all could!!  One thing for sure, your poetry will!

Love
Betty Lou

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10 posted 2003-09-13 01:42 AM


lady, you are the inspiration
Marge Tindal
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11 posted 2003-09-13 09:36 AM


Thankee elebody~

SuthernGal~

Me is no 'troubled maker'
just a ~Warrior~ in disguise
Don't shoot ... until you see
the whites of my eyes~

I've had this one on a back burner for over a year~
YOU are such a sweetie~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com   

suthern
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12 posted 2009-10-12 08:38 AM


Indeed, you are... held in our hearts.
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