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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2003-09-12 07:30 AM

Withdrawal

Blooms are withering on the stem
As limits bind the ATM
Flowing into the current streams
Where change is making all new schemes.

Dust to dust and bloom to bloom
Enough in there to fill the room
Revolving with a turn of rhyme
That is the key to passing time.

Each flower smells just as sweet
When odors pass the nose in treat
And power fills the very core
To reproduce again once more

It is the rhythm of the drum
The sound of life the constant hum
We see the breach the leach and reach
The very waves the roll the beach

And we must add the grime of time
To power up the bloom of prime

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2003-09-12 07:34 AM

it is the perfect rhyme my friend, both your concept and your lovely words...thank you for writing and sharing, you've got me smiling, as this was a great cup of coffee first thing in the morning. Love to you and yours.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2003-09-12 07:36 AM

"It is the rhythm of the drum
The sound of life the constant hum
We see the breach the leach and reach
The very waves the roll the beach

And we must add the grime of time
To power up the bloom of prime"

What a treat to read this morning.
Beautiful, as always, Sy..
When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 2003-09-12 07:41 AM

Some blooms just keep on flowering, sweet Sy...

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2003-09-12 07:44 AM

The flow to your words are as sweet to me as the lovely fragrance of a bloom, dear Sy. Just beautiful.

Best wishes and hugs,
/Kit

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2003-09-12 07:56 AM

LeeJ

vlraynes,
Top of the morning and thank you so much. Hugs

Nan
My love you are up with the flowers. Hugs

Kit,
I know it's not a good one but your reply warms my heart.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

6 posted 2003-09-12 08:36 AM

Sy~

I really loved this...

Made me want flowers...

*sigh*

Susan

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2003-09-12 08:47 AM

If we don't learn from how we grow
then how else would we ever know?

Good Morning, Sy!

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

8 posted 2003-09-12 08:48 AM

Nice flow to this write,Sy..

believe in what your heart feels...

Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

9 posted 2003-09-12 09:00 AM

"And we must add the grime of time
To power up the bloom of prime"

So true, Seymour. Is that why I have to go to work today, so I can have a vacation in April? Oooooooookkkkkkkkkkk, I get it.....

Have a lovely day! ~K~

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

10 posted 2003-09-12 09:09 AM

Susan,
Then I'll send you a rose.

Sunshine
Good morning love.

scorpio
So glad you enjoyed.

Kahlil,
Enjoyed your comment, thank you.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

11 posted 2003-09-12 09:34 AM

"It is the rhythm of the drum
The sound of life the constant hum
We see the breach the leach and reach
The very waves the roll the beach

And we must add the grime of time
To power up the bloom of prime"

Beautiful flow to this lovely piece Sy!
Why..I felt as though I could kick off my
slippers
and waltz around the breakfast table!

Tea's on..I'll pour...you rest, so we can have a dance.
~Morning hugs and tea, Nancy~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have sand in my shoes ~

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

12 posted 2003-09-12 10:09 AM

Nancy,
It would be my delight.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

13 posted 2003-09-12 10:19 AM

Good morning, Mr. T.!

Instead of the "grime of time to power up the bloom of prime", would you care to have a bouquet of roses and some angel kisses?

EA

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

14 posted 2003-09-12 10:47 AM

Earth Angel
It's a deal,

[This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (09-12-2003 10:48 AM).]

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

15 posted 2003-09-12 11:28 AM

Sy ...To love a garden, is to understand the movement of time.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

16 posted 2003-09-12 01:13 PM

Martie
That's the way I tell time.

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

17 posted 2003-09-12 01:32 PM

Dust to dust and bloom to bloom
Enough in there to fill the room
Revolving with a turn of rhyme
That is the key to passing time.

Seymour, I sure do like the way you
pass your time with wonderful rhyme!!