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froggy
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0 posted 2003-09-11 10:04 PM



You have your pattern of thought
as do I which makes us
so unique from each other.

With that we two share

a univeral appeal.

© Copyright 2003 E.Griswold - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-09-11 10:30 PM


YES!
I love the seeming simplicity of this, in all it's complexity.
Well done, Ribbits.

Sunnyone
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2 posted 2003-09-11 11:57 PM


For a frog, you write some wonderful poetry!!!!!  But then, underneath that green facade lies the heart of a Prince, eh?  ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

froggy
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3 posted 2003-09-12 01:24 AM


Thank-you midnitesun.
Sometimes simple is easier said.

Thank-you Sunnyone for the nice complement.
Underneath all the green lies a princess frog
however.

:-)

Ribbits

Nan
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4 posted 2003-09-12 07:10 AM


Hmm.... You + I = US... Simple is good...
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2003-09-12 11:18 AM



A green princess.  Will wonders never cease.  I like green.

And I like simplicity.

It reminds me that I get carried away!

Enjoyed this very much!

icebox
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in the shadows
6 posted 2003-09-12 11:26 AM


Starkly clean and full of meaning.

Excellent.

SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
7 posted 2003-09-12 11:28 AM


A union of two spirits that made harmony. VERY nice froggy!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
8 posted 2003-09-12 11:44 AM


Beautiful in its brevity.
Much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

      ~ Summer can't be over...
   I still have sand in my shoes ~

froggy
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9 posted 2003-09-12 04:13 PM


Thank-you Nan. Simple is good sometimes.

Thank-you Sunshine. Green is cool color.

Thank-you Icebox.Glad you liked it.

Thank-you Shara Rose. I agree totally.

Thank-you Enchantress.Glad you liked it.

Hugs to each of you.

:-)
Ribbit

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